Practice Paragraph - Mi Amiga, familia, yo y perros
How did I do??? :-)
Hola! Quiero hablar acerca de mi, mi amiga el mejor, familia y perros. Mi amiga el mejor es muy bonita y graciosa. Ella es energico aunque a veces quieta. Ella es divorciado pero contenta. Mi madre es amable y simpatica, gentil, nunca egoista, celosa o mezquina. Creo que mi hijo is relativamente talentoso y fiel. Mi perros esta lindo, aunque no disciplinado mucho. Estan mezquino cuando enfadado. Soy cortés, enamorada y prometida. Gracias por tu tiempo. Hasta luego y Cuidate! ********************************************* What I was trying to say.. Hello! I want to talk about me, my best friend, family and dogs. My best friend is very pretty and funny. She is energetic although sometimes calm. She is divorced but happy. My mother is very nice and likeable, gentle and never selfish, jealous or mean. I think my son is rather gifted and faithful. My dogs are cute although not disciplined much. They are mean when angry. I am polite, in love and engaged. Thank you for your time. Until later and take care! |
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¡Muy bien! I was able to understand everything, so good on that. I marked corrections in red and suggestions in blue. I hope you understand these, but if any question, please let me know. Glad that you are having a good time! :) Keep practicing! :thumbsup: |
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Well, on the suggestions this may be my "subjective" "style". I.e., some people may use more often the translations in your flash-cards... That's why I just noted as blue, as the way you have these is not incorrect at all.
Like... I personally would say "un perro fiel" or "un marido fiel", but I would tend to use "un chico digno de confianza". That may just be my personal liking. As long as you understand you can get familiar with words and synonyms and if you start reading and listening to native Spanish speakers, you may notice what is more common in your area, and have your own criteria to choose. At any rate, you are doing good. Keep it up! :) :thumbsup: |
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