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Daria June 23, 2014 10:40 AM

Design of a restaurant.
 
En este hermoso restaurante ofrecemos una variedad buena, satisfacería todo papilas gustatiras. Nuestro cómoda y relajante atmósfera es perfecto para cumpleanos, bodas y aniversarios.
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Could someone correct me?

AngelicaDeAlquezar June 23, 2014 01:34 PM

Here are some hints to improve your text. :)
Quote:

Originally Posted by Daria (Post 150160)
En este hermoso restaurante ofrecemos una variedad buena (Invert word order so it sounds better), satisfacería (Check conjugation) todo papilas gustatiras (This is not a word in Spanish, check your dictionary). Nuestro cómoda (Check gender agreement) y relajante atmósfera es perfecto (Gender agreement) para cumpleanos (Check spelling), bodas y aniversarios.
???
Could someone correct me?



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