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Corrige mis faltas...gracias.

I've made my life as a boldness way of living it. I love the way I live my life and I mean boldness from live the life. They said I'm a spiritual being living a human experience and I don't question it. May be that my life doesn't have poem, as Nicanor said. The "may be" is the sense of Life or her contrary. I try to live life without thouts outside my present. Importante is live a life without matters. Future and pass are a way of living life outside life. I write these lack sanity thougts waiting my time for dreams, avoiding live in future time.
Gracias.

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Originally Posted by pinosilano (Post 186740)

I've made my life as a boldness way of living it.(consider saying, I live boldly) I love the way I live my life and I mean boldness from live the life.(I love living boldly) They say I'm a spiritual being living a human experience, and I don't doubt them. It may be that my life doesn't have poem (poetry? rhyme or reason?) as Nicanor said. The "may be" is the sense of Life or or is it death? I try to live life without thoughts outside the present. What is most important is to live for today. The future and past are a way of living life outside life. I write these crazy thoughts hoping for dreams, avoiding worries about the future.
Gracias.

I don't know if my corrections change what you are trying to convey.

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Originally Posted by poli (Post 186741)

I don't know if my corrections change what you are trying to convey.

Muchas gracias Poli.:thumbsup: