Thread: Can you please find the mistakes in my paragraph?
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Old April 21, 2012, 06:41 PM
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Adding to Rusty's corrections, a little note on style:

It's impolite to say "yo y mi hermano": the other person(s) about whom you are talking should always go before "yo"; so, "mi hermano y yo".
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