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Old September 23, 2012, 03:36 PM
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Good job.
I marked 'tuve' as needing to be changed because its tense doesn't agree with the tense of the verbs used in the sentence previous to it. That sentence is a narrative (letting us know how you were feeling or how you were fairing), so I would expect the next sentence to continue in like fashion.
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