September 19, 2023, 04:06 PM
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rule 1: gravity
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Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: In and around New York
Posts: 7,827
Native Language: English
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Originally Posted by pinosilano
I've made my life as a boldness way of living it.(consider saying, I live boldly) I love the way I live my life and I mean boldness from live the life.(I love living boldly) They say I'm a spiritual being living a human experience, and I don't doubt them. It may be that my life doesn't have poem (poetry? rhyme or reason?) as Nicanor said. The "may be" is the sense of Life or or is it death? I try to live life without thoughts outside the present. What is most important is to live for today. The future and past are a way of living life outside life. I write these crazy thoughts hoping for dreams, avoiding worries about the future.
Gracias.
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I don't know if my corrections change what you are trying to convey.
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