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Old June 06, 2009, 11:34 AM
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Hello ur corrections were very useful.
Thank you so much!
I have corrected them -

A veces, más de un toro se suelta a la vez, algo caerá del feroz animal violentamente y puede llegar a sangrar

<<"violentamente" is a mistake,have removed it.>>

los mejores matadores se elegían como novios
<<Have reframed matadores as ganadores>>
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