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Originally Posted by Awaken
I just want to agree with wrholt and poli on this.
For a while, all my papers/homework had to use "he or she" as the pronoun (this was 20 years ago). Then in high school, we were taught to mix "he" and "she" evenly throughout the paper. However, in today's writing, I see "their" and "they" used almost always.
Remove that incorrect comma and your sentence in fine.
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Yes, of course. The comma. You never write a comma between the subject and the verb. That was silly, I'm not going to say it's a typo, but I did it without thinking. Thanks a lot!!!
