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Old November 02, 2008, 06:03 PM
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Would someone please check my sentences?

Today Jane had a guest in her house.
Hoy Jane tenia una visita en su casa.

Her friend, Sue, dropped by to see her while on her way to work.
Su amiga, Sue, pasó por casa para que ella la podria ver mientras estaba de camino al trabajo.

After Sue had arrived, she said to Jane, "You keep your house very neat these days."
Después de Sue hubo llegado, ella le dijé a Jane, " Tu mantienes su casa muy arreglada estos dias."

"That is because my son and his wife no longer live here. They both were slobs and probably still are." Replied Jane.
Eso es porque mi hijo y su esposa ya no viven aqui. Ellos ambos estaban desalinados y es probable que ellos estén aún." Jane respondió.

"Where is your son now?" Her friend asked her.
Adónde está su hijo ahora?" Su amiga le preguntó.

Jane laughed and said with much sarcasm, "He has moved to Florida.
Jane reó y dijo con mucho sarcasmo, "Él ha mudado a Florida.

HIs wife forced him to go. This harsh climate did not suit her.
Su esposa lo obligo a ir. Este clima riguroso no estaba apropiado para ella.
Este clima aspero no estaba no lo bastante
bueno para ella.
If she can not keep her suntan year around, she believes that she looks like death.
Si ella no pueda mantener su bronceado todo el año, ella cree que se parece a muerto.

In my opinion, her death pallor matches her lackluster personality.
Para mi, su mascarilla/palidez de muerte es iquala a su falta de personalidad.






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