Hello
You have some mistakes
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я хотела бы в этой статье поделиться с вами мое мнение
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You should say "я хотела бы в этой статье поделиться с вами
моим мнением"
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Разве не все мы любим фотографировать
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Better say "Разве все мы не любим фотографировать?"
And you know, may be it is not very serious if you have started learning Russian not so long time ago, but your sentences are not very beautiful, I mean it is like you use Google translate. They have the right sense, but it's hard to read them.( I hope you got me
) But anyway you have done pretty good translation.
P.S. And sorry if i made some mistakes in English