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Old June 05, 2016, 11:31 PM
Jorriss Jorriss is offline
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Originally Posted by Rusty View Post
Yes, it sounds natural, since this looks more like what a realtor would write. Advertising and the like seem to sound better when it's direct and to the point; otherwise, you might lose the sales pitch feel and the reader will move on to something else.

Your translation-"there are still flowers"-sounds very natural, but I would add the conjunction "and."
"El patio es bonito y todavĂ­a hay flores," would be a good translation of what you said, but it doesn't fit the 'sales pitch' style.
Gotcha, that's very helpful, thank you!
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