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Old November 29, 2013, 07:57 PM
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I will give hints as to why things were marked.

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... dejame saber que errores () en () siguiente texto
When a verb is suffixed with a pronoun, the original stress must be retained.
The next word flagged must be differentiated from the conjunction.
The missing word after 'errores' is a verb.
The article is missing.
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¡Estoy muy orgulloso () que soy tu primero amigo con quién tu escribirse en español!
'Estar orgulloso' is always followed by a preposition. You're stating what you're proud of.
The conjunction that follows the missing preposition is introducing a secondary clause. I didn't mark it before, but the verb 'soy', which you correctly conjugated in the indicative mood, should not be used at all. This is because there is no change in subject - 'I am proud that I am'. When there is no change in subject, you should not introduce a secondary clause. Just use the infinitive form instead of the conjugated verb.
When 'primero' precedes a noun, the final 'o' is elided.
The relative pronoun doesn't need an accent mark.
The next pronoun needs to be distinguished as a subject pronoun, if you're going to use it. It isn't needed. The verb, when correctly conjugated, will convey the person in its ending.
The verb must be conjugated, and it should not be pronominal.
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¿Cuando vas a Madrid y por cuanto() dias?
The interrogative is marked in a special way to indicate that it is an interrogative.
The adjective is marked because it needs to agree in number with the word it modifies.
The noun the adjective modifies is misspelled.
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... vacasiones todav ... ¡Ohala pudiera!
Misspelled words.
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... hay que vivir hasta () verano.
You're missing an article (and I added a period at the end of your sentence).

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