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Old September 29, 2015, 10:05 AM
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The sentence seems odd to me.

TS Eliot was looking at the dark moon, which seemed to be the Moon of Death. (It's like the Moon of Death.)
TS Eliot was looking at the dark moon, which suggested the Moon of Death. (It made him think of the Moon of Death.)

I don't like the "that".

For me: "He looked at the car that was blue." -- the blueness of the car is vital here, important.
"He looked at the car, which was blue." -- the blueness is incidental, the car happens to be blue.
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