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Old June 16, 2017, 05:43 PM
Glen Glen is offline
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Good question about mood, aleC. I reckon it ought to be subjunctive. So, tweaking it a little I came up with:

Venís al mundo llorando mientras los a tu lado sonríen. Tratá de vivir de tal manera que cuando dejás el mundo sonrías mientras ellos lloren.

of course ready & willing to adapt verb forms to the intended audience.

Thanks!
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