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Thank you again Sir Rusty!
After all your corrections, I think this will be my last version of my text...
I believe in the magic of music and in its wonderful effect of opening up hearts like flowers. I believe in the rapture of music and in its songs that shoot you not to hurt you, just to choose you and then, illuminate you.
I believe in songs that holding back the hit on time and the time suddenly.
I believe in songs that can take us away from sadness and its damned company, the pain. I also believe that a single song would be enough to heal us or make us ill, to destroy us or save us...
This is the story of a fragmented heart or maybe the story of our fragmented hearts...
I think the sentence related to the time it's clear right now. I am still thinking to use hit but blow it's a good option too. Hit because the sentence could be describing a physical hit (from someone who is fighting with you) and blow because refers to life's blows...and how the songs, or music, can stop that (avoiding suffering)...
I am not sure which one could be better!
Anyway, do you approve my text now?
Well, thanks again Rusty!
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