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Originally Posted by JPablo

Muy bien. Fantástico. He marcado correcciones en rojo y sugerencias en azul.

"Yo" como pronombre, no es necesario usarlo. (Only for emphasis... otherwise is not needed.) (If you meant "since I was young", as a kid, you should say, "desde que era niña" or "desde que era pequeña", ie., if you started when you were 6, 8 old. If you say "joven" gives the idea you started cello when you were about 17 or 18 or even up to 29, if you are older...)

The other suggestions "haya" "practiquen" are the subjunctive forms, which are more used when you say express your belief.
(Ask if any other questions)

Gracias por las correcciones. I'm a bit embarrassed now, pero es por eso que estamos aquí ¿sí? Para mejorar.

Originally Posted by irmamar

Welcome.

Thanks C: