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Old November 28, 2016, 01:57 PM
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Originally Posted by MorshmollowMM View Post
Si fuera director cambía (Check your conjugation, this is not Spanish) las reglas porque un poco de (This formula is only used when you have a singular noun like "un poco de agua" or "un poco de sal".), las reglas son estupido y (*) irritante (Gender and number agreement needed). También, mejoría mi instituto para *** (You need a verb in infinitive here so your sentence won't sound fragmentary) un ambiente mejor.

(*) For reasons of euphony, "y" must be changed to "e" when the next word starts with the sound "i".
- We don't say "agujas y hilos", but "agujas e hilos".
- We don't say "lagartijas y iguanas", but "lagartijas e iguanas".
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