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Originally Posted by Jonathan D.
Mis dos hermanos luchaban libre en el salón cuando los dos idiotas cayeron en el árbol de navidad. Fue Nochebuena.
Eventos (perhaps a better word is needed here) como esos es/son (some prefer the plural form, while others argue that the singular is warranted) la razón (missing something here) mi casa en Toledo es siempre interesante (rather than say that your house is interesting, it would probably be more correct to say that your household life or experience is interesting).
Es posible que mi padre matara a mis hermanos después (still missing half of the expression ('después' doesn't mean 'after') and the conjunction) hube salido (subjunctive mood needed - still missing the prepostion after the verb) Toledo.
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Some good corrections!
I need the English version of that last sentence, please. I don't know what you're trying to say.