Thread: Poem Line
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Old December 17, 2018, 02:07 AM
Jalapeño Jalapeño is offline
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Originally Posted by JPablo View Post
Hi, Jalapeño!

Do you have more context?

Is it supposed to rhyme with the previous line?

What would you propose, or seems better to you?

"As time goes on" could be "conforme pasa el tiempo"...

Then again, without further context, it is anybody's guess...

Let us know, propose what you think it could be, and we will help you!

Welcome to the forums, by the way! :-)
It should be romantic and referring to a girl. Doesn’t need to rhyme because that’s not the style of this poem.
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