[Rusty]

Originally Posted by cwlcwlspanish

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Hola, Professor R. ¿Cómo esta usted? (check spelling)
(Hi, Professor R. How are you doing?)

Me llamo RC. Soy de New York. (translate)
(My name is RC. I came from New York.)

(Yo) Soy un (unnecessary) estudiante en (wrong preposition, and an article is needed prior to the intials that follow) UTNY. Mi universidad es en New York del norte (object belongs with the previous preposition ('en'), move the preposition here prior to 'New York').
(I'm a student at UTNY. My university is in the north of New York.)

(Yo) Tengo cinco clases este semestre.
(I have five classes this semester.)


ellas (omit) Son las lenguas (omit) de japonés, las lenguas (omit) de chino, las lenguas (omit) de español, (need a preposition here) la(missing something here) matemática(missing something here), y (need a preposition here) el (check agreement) novato (wrong word, the proper words need to follow the word that follows) composición.
(They are Japanese, Chinese, Spanish, math and freshman composition.)

Las lenguas (wrong word) de japonés y (need a preposition here) español son mis clases favoritas.
(Japanese and Spanish are my favorite classes.)

mi (doesn't match the English version) profesor de las lenguas de japonés es muy tímida (doesn't agree with the subject) y bastante, (wrong word)
(The professor of my Japanese class is very shy and quiet.)

mi profesor de las lenguas de chino es atrevida y fuerte, (wrong word)
(The professor of my Chinese class is very outgoing and loud.)


mi profesor de las lenguas de español es muy divertida y inteligente.
(The professor of my Spanish class is very funny and smart.)

Those are all the hints I have time to give right now.
If you have questions, ask them.
Then correct the text and repost it so we can have another look.