Watching "Destinos", eh?
I noticed 2 other little things:
"....se dieron cuenta de que sienten un atracción romántica mutua."
I would suggest "sentían." You probably chose the present-tense to suggest that the attraction between A. and R. is not something that later ended (although it began in the past,) but the imperfect can convey this. Preterite-over and done. Imperfect- began in the past, may (or may not) be continuing in the present.
Edit: Oops, just noticed this thread is 2 months old. The assignment must have long since been turned in!
Last edited by Gala; June 14, 2012 at 02:02 AM.
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