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Old April 23, 2008, 02:18 PM
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Originally Posted by Alfonso View Post
Thanks a lot, Poli, for your corrections and suggestions!
I guess I need a rule, and it will be hard to get it.


I think I should consider the phrase as much as apart from the other two structures: as much ... as; so much... that. These last two ones are those I'm most interested in. Let's check some structures:
  • I love you as much as you love that other guy.
  • I love you so much that I would dance with a mouse all a whole night.
And now, trying to open a gap and filling it with some words:
  • I gave you as much love as you brought indifference back to me.
  • I felt so much in love that I'm flying without a pilot license.
Thanks a lot for your help!

You have got it right. When you use the words as much as, think of a scale, because as much as evokes a balance

In so/that, think of the prepositional phrase which intiated with
that as an adverb.

Your sentences have a nice whimsical character that will amuse some and confound others
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