A friend has asked me to correct the Spanish translation of
Would you like your business seen by more people in your local area and for it to generate more sales for your services or products? Press 1 now or press 9 to have your number taken off our data base.
Which she thinks is
¿Desea que su negocio visto por más personas en su área local y las ventas para que genere más de sus servicios o productos?
Pulse 1 ahora o pulse 9 para tener su número retirado nuestra base de datos.
Could anybody rewrite the above Spanish to make it comprehensible? Thanks in advance.
