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There are some obvious errors and there may be others. Without your English version of the narrative, it's hard to tell.
From what I've read about Kahlo, she wasn't involved in a car accident. She was riding in a bus that was hit by a trolley car. So, that's one thing I would change.
Your use of the past participle 'influenciados' should have been a verb conjugated in a past tense instead.
The wording 'elaboración autorretratos' doesn't make sense.
The sentence that begins with 'grandes temas' needs some work.
There are other things that need changed. An English version might reveal even more.
Some hints:
tanto ... como
conocerse a sí misma
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