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Old July 05, 2014, 08:34 AM
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Now, your text is perfect! In spite of it, consider it doesn't sound idiomatic (just like a child written story).

You need "los" before "peces" because "los peces" are the subject of the sentence:

Los peces (Suj) no le (OI) gustan (V) a Mac el oso (OI).

By definition, almost "all" of nouns working as a subject require articles (there are exceptions). I would have used "acaparar" or "adueñarse":

Eos significa que Mac puede acaparar/adueñarse de todas las nueces y (las) bayas.


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