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Old June 23, 2014, 01:34 PM
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Originally Posted by Daria View Post
En este hermoso restaurante ofrecemos una variedad buena (Invert word order so it sounds better), satisfacería (Check conjugation) todo papilas gustatiras (This is not a word in Spanish, check your dictionary). Nuestro cómoda (Check gender agreement) y relajante atmósfera es perfecto (Gender agreement) para cumpleanos (Check spelling), bodas y aniversarios.
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Could someone correct me?
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