June 23, 2014, 01:34 PM
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Obsidiana
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Join Date: Jan 2009
Location: Mexico City
Posts: 9,047
Native Language: Mexican Spanish
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Here are some hints to improve your text. 
Quote:
Originally Posted by Daria
En este hermoso restaurante ofrecemos una variedad buena (Invert word order so it sounds better), satisfacería (Check conjugation) todo papilas gustatiras (This is not a word in Spanish, check your dictionary). Nuestro cómoda (Check gender agreement) y relajante atmósfera es perfecto (Gender agreement) para cumpleanos (Check spelling), bodas y aniversarios.
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Could someone correct me?
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