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Old October 03, 2014, 03:53 PM
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Little help here

Hi there!!

This is part of a complaint letter, I'm not pretty sure if the grammar in bold is correct. Pleas any help?, suggestions?, advice??


I visited the store yesterday in order to solve this problem, but they say that they can’t change my laptop to a new one because this model is not in stock. I have to wait until new merchandise will be in stock.


Thanks a lot!!

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Old October 03, 2014, 06:16 PM
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I'd say exchange my laptop for a new one
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Old October 05, 2014, 05:26 PM
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Hi, this is my suggestion:

I visited the store yesterday in order to solve this problem, but they say they cannot replace my laptop for a new one because the model is not in stock. I have to wait until new merchandise is in stock.
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Old October 06, 2014, 01:42 PM
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Thanks a lot for your advice guys!!.
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