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Antiguo April 19, 2010, 06:08 PM
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Jessica is on a distinguished road
Another poem I wrote :P

I wrote this poem...:P

I watched the girl give her friend a cupcake
My mouth watered, I wanted a cupcake too
But I felt too shy to ask for one
I looked away as tears filled my eyes
It wasn't fair.
Maybe I should've asked for one but I was too scared.
True friends are supposed to sit with you, talk to you, comfort you.
I did not have any true friends.
Sure, they were friendly, but they were not my real friends.
I realized I never felt so alone.
My brothers had friends
I did not.
I blamed it on my shyness and I wished I wasn't so shy.
Maybe I could've made new friends.
My little brother has friends because he gets invited to lots of parties
My older brother has friends because I see his friends put their arms around him.
And me? All alone.
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Antiguo April 21, 2010, 01:53 AM
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I wrote this poem...:P

I watched the girl give her friend a cupcake
My mouth watered, I wanted a cupcake too
But I felt too shy to ask for one
I looked away as tears filled my eyes
It wasn't fair.
Maybe I should've asked for one but I was too scared.
True friends are supposed to sit with you, talk to you, comfort you.
I did not have any true friends.
Sure, they were friendly, but they were not my real friends.
I realized I never felt so alone.
My brothers had friends
I did not.
I blamed it on my shyness and I wished I wasn't so shy.
Maybe I could've made new friends.
My little brother has friends because he gets invited to lots of parties
My older brother has friends because I see his friends put their arms around him.
And me? All alone.

WOW!
Good poem Jessica! Well done
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Antiguo April 21, 2010, 11:08 AM
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Jessica is on a distinguished road
thank you
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