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I need your advice
Hello.
I have sent this e-mail to many costumers, therefore I need if you can check my grammatical, and if you can give me more ideas about as I should to write an e-mail trough of the internet. Buenas noches. Sistemas Informáticos Avanzados quiere darte a conocer nuestros servicios de outsourcing y instalación de servidores VPN’s IPS, servidores de exchange (Correo) Como bien hemos dado a conocer nuestros servicios de instalación de servidores para que tu información nunca se pierda y puedas acceder desde cualquier parte donde estés. Instalaciones de cámaras IP en tiempo real, para que tengas control absoluto de tus oficinas y patios de trabajo puedes verificar en tiempo real durante tu vuelo de negocios el estado de tus instalaciones. Servicios de telefonía IP costos mas económicos en larga distancia e internacional con tecnología Asterik Tenemos gran variedad de accesorios de informática y ventas de equipos de computo, Laptops, servidores HP, DELL, Toshiba, Acer. Contamos con contratos de servicio de outsourcing para tu comodidad con asistencia remota las 24 horas del día. Queremos que conozcas mas afondo nuestros servicios y tus necesidades, por ese motivo te invito a una conferencia el día jueves en punto de las 11 A.M. Por favor confirma tu asistencia, inmediatamente se te enviara un link para entrar a la conferencia, de igual forma si necesitas cotización y tienes inquietudes sobre algún servicio puedes tocar el tema. Saludos. On behalf of We’re pleased to you to know our outsourcing services, installation of VPN’s server and exchange server. As we have told you before our backup server s you never will loss your information of your company, so you can check your stored information from any place where you are. We install IP cameras in real time so you can have the absolute control of your company in video such as you can see in video your yards work and your offices, so you can have absolute control over your employers, you will check out in real time any installed camera in your office meanwhile you are flying toward any destination. We can offer you. IP telephone services, this service are cheaper than others telephone services, the outgoing calling as international calls and national ones are cheaper. We have a great variety of computer accessories and we sell computers and laptops of rename brands like HP, DELL, Toshiba, and Acer computers. We have outsourcing services troughout of a contract with the company for a comfortable assistance; we have helpdesk every day and all the day the 24 hours. We looking forward to let you know more about our services and we want to know your needs about computer, for that reason, I want to invite you to a conference the next Thursday at 11:00 A.M. Please you confirm your assistance and immediately you will get a link where you will join to the video conference, if you have any questions about your needs or if you have some kind of requirement for your assistance, please don’t hesitate to ask me. Sincerely yours.
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The original Spanish was used as a base for my translation, but I added some wording that 'sells' your company's services a bit better. |
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Thank you for the advices.
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