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Old September 10, 2012, 12:48 PM
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(This is an introductory paragraph we were instructed to write in my Spanish I class. Please be gentle!)

Mi nombre es Bobby y soy de Dexter, Missouri. Vivo en Fairborn, Ohio con mi esposa, Elizabeth, y mi niños Bradley y John. Soy operador del 911 y estudio Informática a universídad de Clark State en Beavercreek, Ohio. Tengo veinte y siete años. Mi pelicula preferida es El Desesperar de los Muertos (Shaun of the Dead en los EEUU). ¡Mucho gusto!
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Mi nombre es Bobby y soy de Dexter, Missouri. Vivo en Fairborn, Ohio con mi esposa, Elizabeth, y mi niños (check number agreement) Bradley y John. Soy operador del 911 y estudio Informática a (another preposition is needed) *** (a definite article is needed) universídad (check spelling) de Clark State en Beavercreek, Ohio. Tengo veinte y siete (check the right way to write the numbers) años. Mi pelicula (check spelling) preferida es El Desesperar de los Muertos (Shaun of the Dead en los EEUU). ¡Mucho gusto!
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