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[tacuba]

Buenas tardes:

If I want to ask a receptionist to have his/her boss call me, could I say:
Qué me llame, él, por favor
¿Podrías decirle a él llamarme, por favor?

Is there a more colloquial way to convey the same thing?

Thanks

[Rusty]

The first is OK, but there's no need for the first comma. This is a direct command. There is no hint of politeness. You could add Dígale as the first word and not change the meaning.

The second sentence is more polite than the first. In it, you should avoid using the second person when addressing someone (unless you customarily treat that person that way). There should be two clauses:
¿Podría decirle (a él) que me llame, por favor? (Use a él as needed for clarity.)
¿Le podría decir (a él) que me llame, por favor?

[María José]

You can also say: ¿ Podría decirle que me llamara?

[tacuba]

Escrito originalmente por María José

You can also say: ¿ Podría decirle que me llamara?

Really? I had no idea you could use the imperfect subjunctive in this kind of structure.

Thanks María José

[Rusty]

Escrito originalmente por María José

You can also say: ¿ Podría decirle que me llamara?

This is what I would say, too, but I see that a lot of people don't give weight to the fact that the main clause is in the conditional mood (hence the use of the imperfect subjunctive in the secondary clause). Instead, it seems that they're thinking the initial verb is a 'polite' form and that it doesn't follow the rules.

[tacuba]

Escrito originalmente por Rusty

The first is OK, but there's no need for the first comma. This is a direct command. There is no hint of politeness. You could add Dígale as the first word and not change the meaning.

The second sentence is more polite than the first. In it, you should avoid using the second person when addressing someone (unless you customarily treat that person that way). There should be two clauses:
¿Podría decirle (a él) que me llame, por favor? (Use a él as needed for clarity.)
¿Le podría decir (a él) que me llame, por favor?

Thanks Rusty, as usual very helpful.

BTW, the receptionist I was thinking of is a pretty good friend, hence the use of the familiar tú form.

[cmon]

Would this work?
Si pudieras, decirle que debiera llamarme.

[Rusty]

Escrito originalmente por cmon

Would this work?
Si pudieras, dile que debiera llamarme.

Small correction, but otherwise OK.