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Old October 03, 2014, 04:26 AM
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Can you proofread my homework assignment

Hi I would really appreciate it if someone could read over my assignment and make sure my grammer is correct. I know im missing some accent marks and may have misspelled some things but thats not a big deal since i will be presenting this. Just wanting to make sure my grammer is good.

Hola,
Me llamo -- --. Tengo veintiuno años. Creci en un pequeno pueblo dos horas sur de -- llamada --. Pero estoy vivo actualmente en --. Soy muy acomodadizo y bueno. Soy estudiante de ultimo año y estoy estudiar ciencias de la computadora. Me desperto a ocho en la manana y me corro dos millas. Despues me ducho y voy a clase. Despues clase voy a trabajar a las cuatro. Despues trabajo estoy estudiar. Si tengo tiempo libre me gusta pasar tiempo con mis companeros de habitacion. Tambien me gusta leer y jugar juegos de video.

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My name is -- --. I am 21 years old. I grew up in a small town 2 hours south of -- called --. But I currently live in --. I am very easygoing and nice. I am a senior and am studying computer science. I wake up at 8 en the morning and run 2 miles. After I shower and go to class. After class i go to work at 4. After work i study. If i have free time i like to pass the time with my roommates. I also like reading and playing video games.
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Old October 03, 2014, 06:06 AM
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Hi, I would really appreciate it if someone could read over my assignment and make sure my grammar is correct. I know I'm missing some accent marks and may have misspelled some things but that's not a big deal, since I will be presenting this. Just wanting to make sure my grammar is good.

Hola,
Me llamo -- --. Tengo veintiuno años. Creci en un pequeno pueblo dos horas () sur de -- llamada --. Pero estoy vivo actualmente en --. Soy muy acomodadizo y bueno. Soy estudiante de() ultimo año y estoy estudiar ciencias de la computadora. Me desperto a () ocho en la manana y me corro dos millas. Despues, me ducho y voy a clase. Despues () () clase, voy a() trabajar a las cuatro. Despues () trabajo estoy estudiar. Si tengo tiempo libre me gusta pasar tiempo con mis companeros de habitacion. Tambien me gusta leer y jugar () juegos de video.

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Hi,
My name is -- --. I am 21 years old. I grew up in a small town 2 hours south of -- called --. But I currently live in --. I am very easygoing and nice. I am a senior and am studying computer science. I wake up at 8 in the morning and run 2 miles. After I shower, I go to class. After class, I go to work at 4. After work, I study. If I have free time I like to pass the time with my roommates. I also like reading and playing video games.
Everything marked in red in your Spanish version needs to be fixed. Empty parentheses denote that you're missing a word. Words that appear in grey are not needed.

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