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Old November 09, 2008, 05:10 AM
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i need help with a couple of sentences - it appears im rubbish at word order and verb endings
if some one could correct them for me, i'd be incredibly thankful!!

1. cuándo era siete, mi madre al fin ha persuadida me comer desconfiado comidas. Durante la edades siete a doce, era una grasa niño.

2. ahora sin embargo, estoy tampoco grasa o delgada.

3. estoy alambique no como delgada como gustaria estar, pero gustanria pensar estoy termino medio tamaño
(that one should say something like - i'm still not as thin as i'd like to be but i'd like to think im average size.)

4. ! cuando era en ano seis, alla era una chica en ano tres esa era exactamente la forma de una playa-bola!
that should say - when i was in year 6 there was a girl in year 3 that was the exact shape of a beach ball


i dont know if playa-bola is actually beach ball but i thought it was a good guess methinks
please help asap!
i suck at spanish big time
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Old November 09, 2008, 07:45 AM
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i need help with a couple of sentences - it appears im rubbish at word order and verb endings
if some one could correct them for me, i'd be incredibly thankful!!

1. cuándo era siete, mi madre al fin ha persuadida me comer desconfiado comidas. Durante la edades siete a doce, era una grasa niño.

2. ahora sin embargo, estoy tampoco grasa o delgada.

3. estoy alambique no como delgada como gustaria estar, pero gustanria pensar estoy termino medio tamaño
(that one should say something like - i'm still not as thin as i'd like to be but i'd like to think im average size.)

4. ¡Cuando era en ano seis, alla era una chica en ano tres esa era exactamente la forma de una playa-bola!
that should say - when i was in year 6 there was a girl in year 3 that was the exact shape of a beach ball


i dont know if playa-bola is actually beach ball but i thought it was a good guess methinks
please help asap!
i suck at spanish big time
xx

hmmmm I'm not very good at it either. I'm also bad at correcting. Sorry if I didn't help you.
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1. Cuando tenía siete años, mi madre al fin me persuadió/convenció a comer comidas sospechosas. Desde los siete a los doce años, era una niña gorda.

2. Ahora no soy gorda ni delgada.

3. (Aún) no soy tan delgada como me gustaría ser, pero me gusta pensar que soy de tamaño mediano.

4. Cuando tenía seis años, ¡hubo una chica de tres años que se vió como un balón de playa!
Welcome to the forums!!

I hope these corrections help you.
There is seldom a one-to-one correlation of English words to Spanish words (the respective grammars don't allow that), and some of the words you chose from the dictionary weren't the right ones.

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????????, What?
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Thanks to Rusty's good work.....

1. Cuando tenía siete años, mi madre al fin me persuadió/convenció a comer comidas sospechosas. Desde los siete a los doce años, era una niña gorda. You should write the english to check

2. Ahora no soy gorda ni delgada. You should write the english to check


3. (Aún) no soy tan delgada como me gustaría ser, pero me gusta pensar que soy de tamaño mediano. Better:
(Aún) no soy tan delgada como me gustaría, pero me gusta pensar que tengo una talla normal.

4. Cuando tenía seis años había una chica ¡hubo una chica de tres años que se vió como un balón de playa! Better:
Cuando tenía 6 años había una chica de tres años que era igual que un balón de playa.

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????????, What?
If you don't understand something, try to be more specific about what you don't understand. Just typing "What?" isn't going to help, since we won't even know how to help you.

Si hay algo que es difícil de entender, trata de ser más específico cuando pidas ayuda. El sólo escribir "What?" no tiene caso, ya que nadie sabrá cómo ofrecerte ayuda.

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1. cuándo era siete, mi madre al fin ha persuadida me comer desconfiado comidas. Durante la edades siete a doce, era una grasa niño.

1.-Cuando tenia siete años, mi madre me convencio para que no desconfiara de las comidas, por lo que hasta los doce me puse como una vaca.
2. ahora sin embargo, estoy tampoco grasa o delgada.

2. Ahora ni fu ni fa. No estoy ni gorda ni tampoco flaca.

3. estoy alambique no como delgada como gustaria estar, pero gustanria pensar estoy termino medio tamaño

3. Todavia no estoy tan delgada como quisiera, pero me gusta pensar que soy normalita.

4. ! cuando era en ano seis, alla era una chica en ano tres esa era exactamente la forma de una playa-bola!

4.Cuando estaba en primaria habia una nena mas pequeña que era como las pelotas de playa.
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Hey David, it's was a joke, and yes I understand the text, please you don't mind with me.
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Hey David, it's was a joke, and yes I understand the text, please you don't mind with me.
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