Love poem

[ElyodArish]

Hello all.
I want and need help in writing a poem of sorts to a girl i now (from spain)
She's in trouble kind of! she's pretty. I want to know how to translate a piece i wrote for her.

Here it is

You’re a star

Stay with me forever more


I love you like thunder,& the lighting first.


Remember who you are a still flame!


but come with me i'll show you a place with no wind.


Or if you want to add or alter it to make more sense to you in spainish first option please then if you like tell me what you would add, please only romantics, thanks.

[AngelicaDeAlquezar]

Hello. Please note that the forums aren't a free translation service, but a language learning community. If you're learning Spanish, please post your own translation attempt first, without an online translator. We will help you with corrections.