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Old November 12, 2008, 03:23 PM
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Question Check Grammar and Spelling in mi tarea

Just check my grammar and spelling in my answers.
I'm not sure if it's graded for accuracy but if it is I really want to get them all right!!

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1. ¿Qué le duele a Luisa? ¿Cuánto tiempo hace que le duele? Luisa le duele la espalda. Hace una semana que le duele.

2. ¿Qué les duele a sus padres? Sus padres les duele la cabeza.

3. ¿Cuánto tiempo hace que a Arturo le duele la pierna? Hace tres días que le duele.

4. ¿Qué le duele a Raúl? Raúl le duele el estómago.

5. ¿Qué le pasa a Anita? Anita le duele el cuello.

6. ¿Y tú? ¿Te sientes bien o mal? ¿Qué te duele a ti? Siento bien, pero tengo sueño.

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1. ¿Por qué Luisa no saca fotos? ¿Qué le duele? Luisa no saca fotos porque le duelen los ojos.

2. ¿Por qué Carlos y Rosita no esquían? ¿Qué le duele? Carlos y Rosita no esquían porque les duelen los brazos.

3. ¿Cuánto tiempo hace que Rodolfo no bucea? ¿Qué le duele? Rodolfo hace cinco días que no bucea . Le duele la garganta.

4. ¿Cuánto tiempo hace que Daniel y Paco no nadan? ¿Por qué? Daniel y Paco hace dos semanas que no nadan. Daniel y Paco no nadan porque les duele el oído.

5. ¿Cuánto tiempo hace que Raquel no patina? ¿Por qué? Raquel hace una mesa que no patina. Raquel no patina porque le duele el pie.

6. ¿Por qué Maricarmen no toca la guitarra? ¿Qué le duele? Maricarmen no toca la guitarra porque le duelen los dedos.

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Old November 12, 2008, 03:28 PM
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Old November 12, 2008, 03:45 PM
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1. ¿Qué le duele a Luisa? ¿Cuánto tiempo hace que le duele?

2. ¿Qué las duele a sus padres?
¿Que les duele?
3. ¿Cuánto tiempo hace que a Arturo le duele la pierna?

4. ¿Qué le duele a Raúl?

5. ¿Qué le pasa a Anita?

6. ¿Y tú? ¿Te sientes bien o mal? ¿Qué te duele a ti? Siento bien, pero tengo sueño.
Me siento bien,....
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1. ¿Por qué Luisa no saca fotos? ¿Qué le duele? Luisa no saca fotos porque le duelen los ojos.

2. ¿Por qué Carlos y Rosita no esquían? ¿Qué le duele? Carlos y Rosita no esquían porque les duelen

¿Qué les duele?.....porque les duelen las rodillas

3. ¿Cuánto tiempo hace que Rodolfo no bucea? ¿Qué le duele?

4. ¿Cuánto tiempo hace que Daniel y Paco no nadan? ¿Por qué?
¿Por qué razón?
5. ¿Cuánto tiempo hace que Raquel no patina? ¿Por qué?
¿Por qué razón?
6. ¿Por qué Maricarmen no toca la guitarra? ¿Qué le duele?
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Old November 12, 2008, 04:29 PM
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Jchen, in your questions fault some answers. When do you end the questions.?

How much time do you end of answering the questions?
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Old November 12, 2008, 04:56 PM
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what do you mean CrOtALiTo??
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Old November 12, 2008, 07:12 PM
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Lo siento for the consecutive post, but I really need someone to check it.
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You have ended the questions right, my last questions was, What time you end the questions.?
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Old November 12, 2008, 08:48 PM
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What time I ended the questions??
Lo siento, CrOtALiTo, I don't really understand what you mean by "what time"...
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Lo siento for the consecutive post, but I really need someone to check it.
If you make the corrections in a subsequent post instead of editing the original, we'll see that you have updated the thread and can look at what was changed. Reserve editing for fixing errors you catch yourself and for additional comments you thought of after submitting.

A 1 and A 2 are missing something. Look carefully at the sentence structure in the questions. Your job is to substitute the qué. Everything else in the sentence should remain in your answer (slightly rearranged).
A 3 is OK.
A 4 is missing the same thing that A 1 and A 2 are missing, and it's missing an article.
A 5 is asking another type of question. Your response doesn't make sense. The question is 'What is wrong with Anita?'
A 6 is OK.

B 1 is correct.
B 2 isn't finished.
B 3, B 4, and B 5 need the hace + length_of_time + que + present_tense_verb construct. For example:
I've been studying Spanish for two years.
= Hace dos años que estudio el español.
The rest of the answer could be introduced with porque, like you did in B 6 (the first sentence), and then there would be no reason to repeat words or have a second sentence.
B 6 only needs the first sentence.
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Old November 12, 2008, 09:21 PM
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I made some corrections, but not all because I don't really understand them.
¡TENGO SUEÑO! So I will come on tomorrow and make the other corrections.

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