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Old November 11, 2012, 01:49 PM
Witchejity Witchejity is offline
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We had to write random sentences in class in the form of Preterito Indefinido. Are these sentences all correct? Do I need anymore accents? Thank you!!

Nací en Adelaida en 1997.
A los 6 años, viajé en Malaysia a vivir con monjes.
A los 10 años yo empecé a jugar al fútbol.
A los 7 años tuve dos monos se llamaron Paul y Pepe.
Entre 2002 y 2010 fui una bailarína.
A los 3 años mi hermano nació.
A los 6 años gané un premio de escribiendo.
Entre 1997 y 2012 viví en Adelaida.
A los 2 años me convertí un angel de arroz.
En 2010 rompí mi dedo del pie.
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Old November 11, 2012, 04:59 PM
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It's ok just a few mistakes.

A los 6 años, viajé en Malaysia a vivir con monjes.
It should be: viajé a Malaysia

A los 3 años mi hermano nació.
A los 3 años nació mi hermano.

A los 6 años gané un premio de escribiendo.
A los 6 años gané un premio de escritura.

A los 2 años me convertí un angel de arroz.
I don't know what you tried to say, but that make no sense :S

En 2010 rompí mi dedo del pie.
En 2010 me rompí el dedo del pie.
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