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Old March 06, 2012, 03:28 PM
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Is this correct?

Hey! I have a huge Spanish presentation coming up about Pablo Picasso. I have to give an 11 minute Spanish presentation over 10 of his works I was just wondering if I translated this sentence right?

"When I realized Casagemas was dead, I started painting in blue."

"Cuando me di cuenta Casagemas era muerto, yo empecé pintar en azul."

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Old March 06, 2012, 03:35 PM
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"Cuando me di cuenta (missing a conjunction, at least) Casagemas era (wrong verb, but correct tense) muerto, (yo) empecé (missing a preposition) pintar en azul."
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Old March 06, 2012, 04:13 PM
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Thanks! Can you tell me what mistake I made in the beginning?
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The phrase you're trying to use is always followed by a conjunction. This conjunction isn't always needed in English, but is mandatory in Spanish. Sometimes the phrase you're using has a preposition as its last word, just prior to the conjunction. That's why I added "at least" to my comment.
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When you think you've got it, post the sentence again so we can have another look.
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Old March 06, 2012, 05:01 PM
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Ohh ok!
Cuando me di cuenta de que Casagemas estaba muerto, yo empecé a pintar en azul.
Is that right? Haha.
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Old March 06, 2012, 05:03 PM
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Cuando me di cuenta de que Casagemas estaba muerto, (yo) empecé a pintar en azul.
Good job!

The subject pronoun is unnecessary since the verb ending conveys that information.
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Old March 06, 2012, 05:25 PM
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Ok Thanks so much!
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Yo cambiaría el verbo "estaba" por "había"
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