Dream bedroom

[Jessica]

En mi dormitorio ideal, hay un televisión grande y un baño grande. Cerca de el televisión es una videocasetera. Hay una cocina también. Mi cama grande es (over) un librero y el sillón de cuero. (There is a ladder that goes through a hole, which leads to) mi cama. (Next to) el baño, es una cómada moderna. (On top of) la cómada es un joyero y un espejo de cuadrado. Cerca de la cómada es una guardarropa. (There is a door on the ceiling of the closet, which is the attic door).

The words in bold and () need to be translated. Also, find any mistakes.

[Rusty]

Originally Posted by jchen

En mi dormitorio ideal, hay un televisión grande y un baño grande. Cerca de el televisión es una videocasetera. Hay una cocina también. Mi cama grande es (over) un librero y el sillón de cuero. (There is a ladder that goes through a hole, which leads to) mi cama. (Next to) el baño, es una cómada moderna. (On top of) la cómada es un joyero y un espejo cuadrado. Cerca de la cómada es una guardarropa. (There is a door on the ceiling of the closet, which is the attic door).

The words in bold and () need to be translated. Also, find any mistakes.

A few of us have used the phrase de sueños, which you should use instead of ideal, in other posts.
In your story, it looks like you're using words you haven't learned yet (that's why there are untranslated words ). You'll need to consult a good dictionary or two in order to supply the untranslated words, but not all of them! (This is because I'm sure you already know some of them.)

Here are some questions to ask yourself as you look at the question marks I placed in your story:
What gender is televisión, guardarropa?
What does hay mean? This should probably appear more frequently in your story. When something is located somewhere, the verb to use is not ser. Do you know what it is?

It sounds like your bed is in a loft, and is reached by climbing up a ladder through a hole cut in floor of the loft. The loft is above the (library?) and the leather armchair.
Let me help you a bit here:
escaleras para altillo (noun)
escaleras que conducen/suben/dan (acceso)/van al altillo (phrase)

[CrOtALiTo]

Originally Posted by jchen

En mi dormitorio ideal, hay un televisión grande y un baño grande. Cerca de el televisión es una videocasetera. Hay una cocina también. Mi cama grande es (over) un librero y el sillón de cuero. (There is a ladder that goes through a hole, which leads to) mi cama. (Next to) el baño, es una cómada moderna. (On top of) la cómada es un joyero y un espejo de cuadrado. Cerca de la cómada es una guardarropa. (There is a door on the ceiling of the closet, which is the attic door).

The words in bold and () need to be translated. Also, find any mistakes.

I will correct you.
En mi dormitorio ideal, hay una television grande y cerca de la television hay un baño demasiado grande, tambien tengo una videocasetera cerca de la television, hay una cocina cerca, mi cama es grande y al otro lado del librero y el sillon de cuero hay una escalera que pasa atravez de un hueco, mi cama esta siguiente al baño, ahi tengo una comoda cercano a la comoda hay un guardarropa, al igual hay una puerta en el techo de el closet ahi se encuentra la puerta del atico.


I never didn't like the attics, I don't know but it cause me fear.