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Old May 11, 2007, 08:42 AM
celador celador is offline
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Night Comes On

These two Dusk and Dawn were written as a pair.

I would like a Spanish translation for them but I was thinking that maybe it would be better if I didn't post my translation first.

Ideally it would be nice to preserve the rhythm at least if not some of the rhyme too.

Night Comes On

Shroud of dusk
as sunlight fades
and dimming light
no longer stays
shadows lengthen
until gone
melting features
night comes on
like black satin
dark enfolding
embracing beauty
eyes closed holding
a long last sigh
when breath begins
its preparation
to draw in.
So passion filled
the daylight spent
the spirit full
at dusk content
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