Need help - Juan and Lisa

[torfio13]

i need help to translate this

Juan and Lisa are in Seville. It is very hot, but Juan thinks that it will rain.

This afternoon they visit Juan's parents, who live in a village near Seville.

They drive in the bus. The stop is close.

Juan have to work, but Lisa must buy a gift for Juan's parents.

She buys a book about Denmark.

the Clerk thinks that Finland is in Scandinavia. She asks how the climate is in Denmark.

Lisa responded that it is cold in Denmark, but the landscape is very green.

The book costs 13 Euros. Lisa pay by credit card.

When Lisa and Juan take the bus, it rains.

please need help for this fast it is for my school project

[Rusty]

Where's your attempt?!?
We won't do your homework for you.

[torfio13]

Offcause but i would appreciate if you could fix my mistakes


Juan y Lisa están en Sevilla.
Es muy caliente, pero Juan creo que va a contar.
En la tarde, visitan a los padres de Juanes que viven en un pueblo cerca de Sevilla.
Corren en el autobús.
Parada el terreno está cerca.
Juan debe funcionar, pero Lisa tiene que comprar un regalo para Juanes padres.
Ella compra un libro sobre Dinamarca.
Ekspeditricen creo que Finlandia se encuentra en Escandinavia.
Ella le pregunta cómo es el clima en Dinamarca.
Lisa responde que es frío en Dinamarca, pero el paisaje es muy verde.
El libro costará 13 Euros.
Pago de Lisa con tarjeta.
Cuando Lisa y Juan toma el autobús, lo contando.

[Rusty]

Originally Posted by torfio13

Juan and Lisa are in Seville.
Juan y Lisa están en Sevilla.

It is very hot, but Juan thinks that it will rain.
Es muy caliente (there is a set form that should be used when describing the weather - 'hace' + 'heat' or 'cold', for example), pero Juan creo (wrong person) que va a contar (incorrect verb).

This afternoon they visit Juan's parents, who live in a village near Seville.
En la tarde (proper Spanish, but it doesn't match the English version), visitan a los padres de Juanes (noun + 'de' + noun = possession - 'padres de Juan' - remember this form - you'll need to use it again later) que viven en un pueblo cerca de Sevilla.

They drive (wrong verb - s/b 'ride') in the bus.
Corren (wrong verb) en el autobús.

The stop is close.
Parada el terreno (wrong vocabulary - also, an article is needed) está cerca.

Juan have (wrong person) to work, but Lisa must buy a gift for Juan's parents.
Juan debe (wrong verb - s/b a form of 'tener que') funcionar (wrong verb), pero Lisa tiene que comprar un regalo para Juanes padres (possession - look above for the right form).

She buys a book about Denmark.
Ella compra un libro sobre Dinamarca.

the Clerk thinks that Finland is in Scandinavia.
Ekspeditricen (needs translated to Spanish) creo (wrong person) que Finlandia se encuentra en Escandinavia.

She asks how the climate is in Denmark.
Ella le (not in the English version) pregunta cómo es el clima en Dinamarca.

Lisa responded (wrong tense) that it is cold in Denmark, but the landscape is very green.
Lisa responde que es frío en Dinamarca, pero el paisaje es muy verde.

The book costs 13 Euros.
El libro costará (wrong tense - be careful, this verb has a stem change in the present tense) 13 Euros.

Lisa pay (wrong person) by credit card.
Pago de Lisa (subject-verb order isn't maintained) con tarjeta (what kind of card?).

When Lisa and Juan take the bus, it rains.
Cuando Lisa y Juan toma (wrong person) el autobús, lo contando (wrong verb - there is no need to translate the subject pronoun 'it', and 'lo' isn't the correct translation, anyway - that is the direct object pronoun 'it').

Originally Posted by torfio13

Offcause (Of course, ?) but i would appreciate (it) if you could fix my mistakes.

I've marked the mistakes in red and have given you hints on how to fix them in purple.

It looks like you used a machine to do your translations and that the version you used for the translation process was written in Danish. This could account for a few of the errors.

[torfio13]

thanks alot and yes some have been writing in translations and how did you know it was from danish

[Rusty]

Some of the Danish was left untranslated.

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