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Old October 20, 2019, 09:22 AM
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Checking homework - Pretérito Perfecto

Hi, I was asked to write few sentences about my holidays in Pretérito Perfecto. Would you mind checking them? And maybe telling me, if there are any words that could be replaced by more advanced ones?

Estas vacaciones yo he visitado Italia con mi familia.
Hemos ido en avión. Nos hemos hospedado en el hotel en Bolonia. En Bolonia nosotros hemos visitado la catedral de San Pietro, la universidad y hemos caminado por las calles encantadores. Desde Bolonia hemos ido en tren a las ciudades cercanas, que nosotros han gustado mucho. También hemos estado en Mediolan. Durante nuestra estancia hemos visto muchos bellas obras de arte y hemos visitado la catedral muy famosa. En Italia hemos probado la comida local. Lo hemos saboreado mucho, especialmente Tagliatelle al Ragù.
Hemos han gustado nuestras vacaciones de este año
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Old October 20, 2019, 03:59 PM
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Great job!
Some suggestions and hints below:
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Estas vacaciones yo he visitado Italia con mi familia.
Hemos ido en avión. Nos hemos hospedado en el (An indefinite article would be better; otherwise you mean there is only one hotel in Bologne) hotel en Bolonia. En Bolonia nosotros (Not wrong, but you may get rid of this pronoun, it's redundant.) hemos visitado la catedral de San Pietro, la universidad y hemos caminado por las calles encantadores (Check the gender agreement, "calles" is a feminine). Desde Bolonia hemos ido en tren a las ciudades cercanas, que nosotros (You're using a personal pronoun here, but you need an object pronoun instead) han gustado mucho. También hemos estado en Mediolan (Check the Spanish translation for this city). Durante nuestra estancia hemos visto muchos bellas obras (Check gender agreement) de arte y hemos visitado la catedral muy famosa. En Italia hemos probado la comida local. Lo hemos saboreado mucho, especialmente *** (Article missing here) Tagliatelle al Ragù.
Hemos han (You can't write two conjugated verbs together, even less the same verb conjugated for two different persons.) gustado nuestras vacaciones de este año
Let me suggest studying how the verb "gustar" is used. You may find this thread useful. If you have any questions, let me know.
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