Entitled to redeem

Xinfu · #1 June 06, 2014, 02:20 AM

My terms and conditions draft:

1.This voucher is only entitled to redeem 8 pieces of Delicate Cake priced at $4 at Max's Cake.
2. This voucher cannot be exchangeable for cash.
3.This offer cannot be used in conjunction with Max's Cake Coupon.
4. Only original voucher is accepted.

Are my sentences correct and natural English?

**Rusty** · #2 June 06, 2014, 05:50 AM

Numbers 1 and 2 are OK, but I would personally not choose 'entitled to redeem' and 'cannot be exchangeable'.
Number 3 is very natural English.
Number 4 needs an article.

poli · #3 June 06, 2014, 07:59 AM

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Originally Posted by Xinfu

My terms and conditions draft:

1.This voucher is only entitled to redeem 8 pieces of Delicate Cake priced at $4 at Max's Cake.
2. This voucher cannot be exchangeable for cash.

3.This offer cannot be used in conjunction with Max's Cake Coupon.
4. Only original voucher is accepted.

Are my sentences correct and natural English?

1) With this voucher you are entitled to redeem 8.....
2)This voucher cannot be exchanged for cash.

Xinfu · #4 June 06, 2014, 10:15 AM

Thank you~

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