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Hello guys!
We are supposed to write a short "letter to a spanish friend" for our homework. Can someone help me and corret the errors in my letter? Thank you! Here it goes: Queriodo Luiz El vacaciones es el terminado y yo preparo por la nuevo año. Tengo muchos metas nuevos. Por ejemplo dentro de la escuela y mí salud. Espero de nuevo año, y estoy loca por verte en el vacaciones en el verano Escribo esta letra para que te enteres como he celebrado la vacaciones. Como usted sabe yo es un musulmán y no celebrado el navidad. Pero, he tenido un relajado, calmademente vacaciones. Por la mayor parte del tiempo, he pasado con la familia. En realidad, en la vacaciones esta mismo, pero la invierno humor que lo hace diferente. Es muy placentero. He utlizado mucho tiempo en mirar peliculas, como siempre, Además he jugado mucho Playstation 3. Una dia, fui a Oslo com mi madre i hermano mayor. Comimos un pizza delicioso. Yum, yum! Pero, Lo mejor de el vacaciones era mi cumpleaños y muchas gracias por su carnet. ¡Usted lo recuerda! Finalmente fue noche vieja. Para ser justos estuvo aburrido. Había tan poco, donde yo vivo. ¿Pero Luiz? ¿Qué pasó con usted? Es muy curioso. ¿Ustedes lo celebran de una manera diferente ¡Espero saber de tí! ¡Te extraño Luiz! ¡Yo estoy estupendo estos días! Por favor, contestame pronto. Tus amigo, Ali Sorry for the title being misspelled. I do not know how to edit it. Last edited by Rusty; January 05, 2012 at 09:53 PM. Reason: merged back-to-back posts - changed title |
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I changed the title and merged your back-to-back posts. You can edit your posts if you want to change the title (select 'Advanced' reply). You can edit a post to add more comments instead of posting contiguous messages. I've given you some hints about what needs to be changed. Once in awhile I gave you the correction. I have no idea what you were trying to say in some places. Please provide the English phrase. Ask questions about anything I marked. When you've corrected your letter, repost it so we can have another look. |
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Newbie, you have a lot of errors in your letter, as Rusty pointed you. Some of them, are with the use of ', like in the word "cómo" when it's a question. But I think for your level would be better no to pay attention to that.
The most important error are with the use of wrong words, words that are not accurate for what you are trying to say. For example: "Te escribo para que te enteres" - enteres es really not used here, it would say something like "para contarte = to tell you" or something like that. This, and "Finalmente fue Noche Vieja" is the only two important errors that Rusty hasn't corrected. Here you are sayin: Finally it was New Year`s Eve (is that correct in english??) - and you should say something like: "Finally, New Year's Eve arrived" or "came"- Not sure if that's correct in English... But this is the kind of verb that you should use here. Try to write it again and correct the most errors you can. Then we'll do another revision of the text. |
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