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Old December 21, 2017, 10:23 AM
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Could I get some corrections and input?

I wrote out this little paragraph thing in spanish using different tenses and I would like it if you guys could help me out and show me what I did wrong. Thank you.

El verano pasado, fui a Hawái para un viaje. El tiempo era soleado y caliente. En Hawái, el mar es un destino popular para turistas, por lo tanto quiero ir. El hotel era sucio y un hombre traté de robar mi cartera. El primer día de la vacación, yo habría comprado helado a la playa pero no tuve dinero. En el próximo viaje, miraré mi cartera mejor. Yo había olvidado mi cartera en el vestíbulo. He aprendido mi lección.
El verano próximo, iré a Alemania. Alemania tiene muchas chicas bonitas. Estoy ahorrado para el viaje. Habré tenido suficiente dinero por abril próximo. Yo habría tenido suficiente dinero por el noviembre pasado, pero había perdido mi trabajo.
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