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Old November 03, 2008, 12:07 PM
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En mi dormitorio ideal, hay un televisión grande y un baño grande. Cerca de el televisión es una cocina también. Tengo un escritorio grande y un laptop. Cerca del escritorio es un cuadro bonito. En mi cocina, hay una estufa y un refrigerador. Yo puedo lavar la ropa en el baño, porque el baño es el lavadero.

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Old November 03, 2008, 01:08 PM
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You found mistakes in your post or what?
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Old November 03, 2008, 01:10 PM
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No I just want to see if there's any errors in this paragraph.
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En mi dormitorio ideal, hay una televisión grande y un baño grande. Cerca de la televisión hay una cocina también. Tengo un escritorio grande y un laptop (portatil). Cerca de el escritorio hay una cuadro bonito. En mi cocina, hay una estufa y un refrigerador. Yo puedo lavar la ropa en el baño, porque el baño es el lavadero.
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Cerca del escritorio hay un cuadro bonito.

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Old November 03, 2008, 07:55 PM
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Old November 03, 2008, 08:41 PM
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You've four errors in your narrative.
Hint: Compare the narrative in post #1 with the copy in post #4 and the corrections from post #5. The combination of the two will render a correct narrative.
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