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Old January 18, 2010, 07:09 PM
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Necesito ayuda con un párrafo de don Quijote

Por favor, corrigen los errores de gramática.

Don Quijote era un hombre que vivió en la Mancha. En vez de dormir,él leía muchos libros de caballerías y se volvió loco por los libros. Don Quijote quería ser un caballero, y entonces él se armó de las armas de sus bisabuelos y obtuvo un "caballo", pero en realidad su caballo era un rocín. Él le dio el nombre "Rocinante" a su caballo. Según don Quijote, todos los caballeros necesitaban una dama de quien enamorarse. Pero, la mujer para don Quijote no era una dama noble sino una labradora simple que se llamaba "Dulcinea". A fin de que ella se enamorara de don Quijote, él necesitaba vencer a un gigante.


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Old January 19, 2010, 08:11 AM
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Por favor, corrigen los errores de gramática.

Don Quijote era un hombre que vivió en la Mancha. En vez de dormir,él leía muchos libros de caballerías y se volvió loco por los libros. Don Quijote quería ser un caballero, y entonces él se armó de las armas de sus bisabuelos y obtuvo un "caballo", pero en realidad su caballo era un rocín. Él le dio el nombre "Rocinante" a su caballo. Según don Quijote, todos los caballeros necesitaban una dama de quien enamorarse. Pero, la mujer para don Quijote no era una dama noble sino una labradora simple que se llamaba "Dulcinea". A fin de que ella se enamorara de don Quijote, él necesitaba vencer a un gigante.


Gracias por su ayuda.


Very nice is the story, I have never read the Don Quijote's story, but I guess that could it be interesting.
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Por favor, corrijan los errores de gramática (los errores gramaticales).

Don Quijote era un hombre que vivió en la Mancha. En vez de dormir, (él) leía muchos libros de caballerías y se volvió loco por los libros. Don Quijote quería ser un caballero, y entonces (choose something that means 'so') (él) se armó de las armas de sus bisabuelos y obtuvo (wrong verb) un "caballo", pero en realidad su caballo era un rocín. Él le dio el nombre "Rocinante" a su caballo. Según don Quijote, todos los caballeros necesitaban una dama de quien enamorarse. (Pero,) La mujer para él no era una dama noble sino una labradora simple que se llamaba "Dulcinea". A fin de que ella se enamorara de don Quijote, él necesitaba vencer a un gigante.
Some corrections and hints above. Good job.
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La labradora se llamaba Aldonza Lorenzo. Dulcinea fue el nombre que le dio Don Quijote al "transformarla" en dama.
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La labradora se llamaba Aldonza Lorenzo. Dulcinea fue el nombre que le dio Don Quijote al "transformarla" en dama.
Ohh, then you know about his story.


I have never read about Don Quijote.

But I know that he were a person very important in that time.
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Ohh, then you know about his story.


I have never read about Don Quijote.

But I know that he were was a person very important person in that time.
Crotalito, by what you've written, I would understand that you think Don Quijote was a real person. My corrections above.
Don Quijote is a book written by Cervantes. If I misunderstood, I apologise.
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Not only I practice my English, thank you for the correction.

I knew that was ( Was ), but I tough that were was the best.

and I have a mistake in the subject.

I appreciate the support.
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