Poems in English, please translate in Spanish

[vita32]

NOVEMBER

On a cold November day
I came to Tennessee.

From the land of eternal spring
where flowers ever blooming.

Rainy and sunny days
are the seasons of the year;

I said goodbye to verdant mountains;
I was greeted by barren hills.

Cycles of Spring, Summer, Fall, Winter
came and went;

Still I'm here in Tennessee!!!

Spanish Translation (my humble attempt on translating)

NOVIEMBRE

Sobre de una fria dia de Noviembre
vine a Tennessee;

Del tiera de primavera eterna
donde las flores de la planta,
siempre ofrecen su belleza.

Dias de llovar y del sol
es la temporada del ano.

Dijo Adios a montanas verdes con vida;
arboles muertos me dio la bienvenida.

Siclos de primavera, verano, otono y invierno
llego y se fue;

Aqui estoy todavia en Tennessee!!!

Note: Pardon for not using the proper accents, there is no accent editor on the editing screen. Sorry.

Now I'm ready to be corrected. Thanks, Rusty, for suggesting that I try to translate it first.

[Rusty]

Don't you want to try a translation of your own first?