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I have to write an essay for my Spanish 3 class and I need someone to review it. Tell me if there are any errors, thanks.
Tengo que escribir un ensayo para mi clase de español 3 y necesito alguien que repasarlo. Dime si hay errores, gracias. Topic/Tema: ¿Quién eres? Essay: Hidden Text: Show/Hide
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Things marked in red need changed. I gave hints and asked questions in purple. I marked one verb in purple that would sound better in another tense. I also provided a link to the Spanish equivalent of the saying your mother quoted. There are probably other changes that others will suggest. Welcome to the forums, by the way! |
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