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Old July 18, 2009, 01:18 PM
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Mi poema

Hola a todos!

Traduje una pequeña poema indiana (La Luna) en mi blog,pensé de compartirlo.
http://spanishlearnings.blogspot.com/

Saludos desde la India,
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Old July 18, 2009, 03:05 PM
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It was very nice, I like poems, you made a great work with the translation of the poem.

Thank you for share it.
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Lo difícil de traducir poemas y cosas por el estilo es intentar hacer rimar los versos.
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Old July 19, 2009, 04:04 AM
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Está muy bien el poema, Raji, pero yo no usaría la palabra "pájara", tiene connotaciones negativas, al menos en España
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Old July 19, 2009, 07:05 AM
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Hola Irmamar,

El poema orginal dice "vuelas como papalote" pero papalote no está rimando.
Por eso yo tradujé como "vuelas como pájara".
Ahora he cambiado al "vuelas como grulla"
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Old July 19, 2009, 07:11 AM
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Eso está mejor, Raji
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Well done Raji.
Continue practicing your Spanish.
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