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Old November 16, 2012, 07:03 PM
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I just want to make sure that this is all conjugated correctly.

Yo me levanto a las seis. Yo necesito una cama y para apagar la luz. El es durmiendo en mi casa. El usa sus ojos y nariz.

Me preparo tomando una ducha a las seite y veinte. Yo necesito vestidos y champu. El esta duchando en el bano. El usa los manos.

Yo me cepillarse los dientes a las seite y media. Yo necesito pasta de dientes. El esta cepillando en el bano. El usa los manos y la boca.

Yo me estoy desayuno a la seite y veinte cinco. Yo necesito comida. El esta arreglando en la cocina. El usa los manos y la boca.

Yo me voy a la escuela a las seite y cincuenta. Yo necesito un lapiz. El esta tiene prisa. El usa pies y la boca.

Yo me hace la tarea a las dos. Yo necesito un lapiz. El esta trabajando. El usa los manos.

Yo me mirar una pelicula a las cinco. Yo necesito una pantalla. El esta relajando. El usa los ojos.

Yo me dormirse a las once. Yo necesito almohada. El esta durmiendo. El usa los ojos

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Old November 16, 2012, 08:32 PM
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(Yo) me levanto a las seis.
(Yo) necesito una cama y (something is missing here) para apagar la luz.
El es durmiendo en mi casa.
El usa sus ojos y nariz.
Me preparo tomando una ducha a las seite y veinte.
(Yo) necesito vestidos y champu.
El (missing something here) esta duchando en el bano.
El usa los manos.
(Yo) me cepillarse los dientes a las seite y media.
(Yo) necesito pasta de dientes.
El (missing something here) esta cepillando en el bano.
El usa los manos y la boca.
(Yo) me estoy desayuno a la seite y veinte cinco.
(Yo) necesito comida.
El (missing something here) esta arreglando en la cocina.
El usa los manos y la boca.

(Yo) me voy a la escuela a las seite y cincuenta.
(Yo) necesito un lapiz.
El esta tiene prisa.
El usa (missing something here) pies y la boca.

(Yo) me hace la tarea a las dos.
(Yo) necesito un lapiz.
El esta trabajando.
El usa los manos.

(Yo) me mirar una pelicula a las cinco.
(Yo) necesito una pantalla.
El (missing something here) esta relajando.
El usa los ojos.

(Yo) me dormirse a las once.
(Yo) necesito (missing something here) almohada.
El esta durmiendo.
El usa los ojos.
Welcome to the forums!

I've marked in red what needs fixed, including all the missing accent marks and the Spanish letter 'ñ'.
You can find all the special characters you need in the 'Accents' drop-down box just above where you type. Please use them, as there is a world of difference between words like 'esta' and 'está', 'El' and 'Él', 'bano' and 'baño', etc.

Please repost this once you have fixed all you can so that we can have another look.

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Old November 16, 2012, 08:38 PM
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There are a number of mistakes, and sometimes some (hints)
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I just want to make sure that this is all conjugated correctly.

Yo me levanto a las seis. Yo necesito una cama y para (why do you think you need a preposition here?) apagar la luz. El (spelling) es (wrong verb) durmiendo en mi casa. El (spelling) usa sus ojos y *** (missing something) nariz.

Me preparo tomando (-ndo form cannot follow the verb prepara) una ducha a las seite y veinte. Yo necesito vestidos (there's a better word choice here) y champu (spelling). El (spelling) esta (spelling) duchando en el bano (spelling). El (spelling) usa los (agreement) manos.

Yo me cepillarse (please conjugate) los dientes a las seite y media. Yo necesito pasta de dientes. El (spelling) esta (spelling) cepillando (should be a pronominal verb) en el bano (spelling). El (spelling) usa los (agreement) manos y la boca.

Yo me estoy desayuno (wrong verb construction) a la seite y veinte cinco. Yo necesito comida. El (spelling) esta (spelling) arreglando *** (missing a direct object) en la cocina. El (spelling) usa los (agreement) manos y la boca.

Yo me voy a la escuela a las seite y cincuenta. Yo necesito un lapiz (spelling). El (spelling) esta (spelling) tiene (cannot have two conjugated verbs in a row) prisa. El (spelling) usa *** (missing article) pies y la boca.

Yo me hace (agreement, should not be pronominal) la tarea a las dos. Yo necesito un lapiz (spelling). El (spelling) esta (spelling) trabajando. El (spelling) usa los (agreement) manos.

Yo me mirar (conjugation, not pronominal) una pelicula (spelling) a las cinco. Yo necesito una pantalla. El (spelling) esta (spelling) relajando. El (spelling) usa los ojos.

Yo me dormirse (conjugation) a las once. Yo necesito *** (missing article) almohada. El (spelling) esta (spelling) durmiendo. El (spelling) usa los ojos

Thank you
Most of the spelling errors are missing accents or failure to use a special character. Accent marks and special characters are NOT optional when writing Spanish. In the formatting bar across the top of the edit windows for this forum you can find a drop-down list named "Accents" that let you type all of the accented letters and special characters for Spanish.

If you make corrections and repost them, we'll have another look. If you don't understand what's wrong with a particular mistake, please ask us.

*Edit:

I see Rusty also replied: he's sharper at catching mistakes than I am.

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Old November 16, 2012, 09:39 PM
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Thanks guys, and yeah I know about the accents. Just ignore them for now if you can.

(Yo) me levanto a las seis.
(Yo) necesito una cama y (Not sure) para apagar la luz.
El esta (I know about the accents) dormir en mi casa.
El usa sus ojos y nariz.
Me preparo tomar una ducha a las seite y veinte.
(Yo) necesito vestidos y champu.
El se(missing something here) esta duchando en el bano.
El usa los manos.
(Yo) me cepillo los dientes a las seite y media.
(Yo) necesito pasta de dientes.
El (missing something here) esta cepillando en el bano.
El usa los manos y la boca.
(Yo) me estoy desayuno a la seite y veinte cinco.
(Yo) necesito comida.
El se(I think so) esta arreglando en la cocina.
El usa los manos y la boca.

(Yo) me voy a la escuela a las seite y cincuenta.
(Yo) necesito un lapiz.
El esta tener prisa.
El usa (I'm not sure) pies y la boca.

(Yo) me hace la tarea a las dos.
(Yo) necesito una lapiz.
El esta trabajando.
El usa los manos.

(Yo) me veo una pelicula a las cinco.
(Yo) necesito una pantalla.
El (missing something here) esta relajando.
El usa los ojos.

(Yo) me dormirse a las once.
(Yo) necesito una almohada.
El esta durmiendo.
El usa los ojos.

I tried to fix what I know. Again, ignore the accents on the words.
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Old November 16, 2012, 11:03 PM
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Necesito una cama y (Not sure) para apagar la luz. (What are you trying to say here?)
El esta dormir en mi casa. (Correct verb, but you need the gerundio you had before)
Me preparo (need a preposition here) tomar una ducha a las seite y veinte.
El usa los manos.
Me cepillo los dientes a las seite y media.
Necesito pasta de dientes.
El (missing something here) esta cepillando en el bano. (you got the pronoun correct in another sentence, where you left my comments in)
El usa los manos y la boca.
Me estoy desayuno a la seite y veinte cinco.
El usa los manos y la boca.

Me voy a la escuela a las seite y cincuenta.
Necesito un lapiz.
El esta tener prisa. (one verb is needed, and it needs to be conjugated)
El usa (article needed here) pies y la boca.

me hace la tarea a las dos.
Necesito una lapiz.
El usa los manos.

me veo una pelicula a las cinco.
El (missing something here) esta relajando.
Me dormirse a las once.
Better! I omitted the sentences that are correct. The stuff in red still needs to be fixed.
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Old November 16, 2012, 11:31 PM
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Yo Necesito para apagar la luz.
El esta durmiendo en mi casa. (Correct verb, but you need the gerundio you had before)
Me preparo (need a preposition here) tomar una ducha a las siete y veinte.
El usa las manos.
Me cepillo los dientes a las siete y media.
Necesito pasta de dientes.
El (missing something here) esta cepillando en el bano. (you got the pronoun correct in another sentence, where you left my comments in)
El usa las manos y la boca.
Me estoy desayuno a la seite y veinte y cinco.
El usa los manos y la boca.

Me voy a la escuela a las siete y cincuenta.
Necesito un lapiz.
El esta prisa. (one verb is needed, and it needs to be conjugated)
El usa los(article needed here) pies y la boca.

me hace la tarea a las dos.
Necesito una lapiz.
El usa las manos.

Yo soy veo una pelicula a las cinco.
El (missing something here) esta relajando.
Me dormir a las once.

That's really all I know. I am unsure about the others.
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Old November 16, 2012, 11:53 PM
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Necesito para apagar la luz. (Again, what are you trying to say here, in English?)
Me preparo (need a preposition here) tomar una ducha a las siete y veinte. (What you need is a preposition, like the one for 'to' - the Spanish infinitive doesn't have a built-in 'to' like most text books would have you believe.)
El (missing a pronoun - cepillarse is reflexive, so the reflexive pronoun goes here) esta cepillando en el bano.
Me estoy desayuno a la seite y veinte y cinco. (The conjugation is incorrect. You are trying to use the present progressive. I wouldn't. Just say 'me desayuno'. That means "I eat breakfast.")
El usa los manos y la boca.

El esta prisa. (wrong verb)

me hace la tarea a las dos. (How do you say "I do"?)
Necesito una lapiz. (wrong article)

Yo soy veo una pelicula a las cinco. ('veo' means "I see (watch a film)")
El (missing something here) esta relajando. (relajarse is a reflexive verb, so you need a reflexive pronoun)
Me dormir a las once. (conjugate the verb - the reflexive pronoun is correct)
Hope the hints help.
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Old November 17, 2012, 08:00 AM
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Necesito para apagar la luz. (Again, what are you trying to say here, in English?) I need to turn off the light.
Me preparo por(need a preposition here) tomar una ducha a las siete y veinte. (What you need is a preposition, like the one for 'to' - the Spanish infinitive doesn't have a built-in 'to' like most text books would have you believe.)
El se(missing a pronoun - cepillarse is reflexive, so the reflexive pronoun goes here) esta cepillando en el bano.
Me estoy desayuno a la seite y veinte y cinco. (The conjugation is incorrect. You are trying to use the present progressive. I wouldn't. Just say 'me desayuno'. That means "I eat breakfast.")
El usa las manos y la boca.

El tengo prisa. (wrong verb)

Yo hago la tarea a las dos. (How do you say "I do"?)
Necesito un lapiz. (wrong article)

Yo soy veo una pelicula a las cinco. ('veo' means "I see (watch a film)")
El se(missing something here) esta relajado. (relajarse is a reflexive verb, so you need a reflexive pronoun)
Me duermo a las once. (conjugate the verb - the reflexive pronoun is correct)

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Necesito para apagar la luz.
(Again, what are you trying to say here, in English?) I need to turn off the light.
(Ah! After the verb 'necesitar' there is no need for a preposition before using the infinitive. For example: I need to go = Necesito ir)

Me preparo por (wrong preposition) tomar una ducha a las siete y veinte. (You need to use another preposition.)

El se esta cepillando en el bano.

Me estoy desayuno a la seite y veinte y cinco. (The conjugation is incorrect. I wouldn't try to use the present progressive. Just say 'me desayuno'. That means "I eat breakfast.")

El usa las manos y la boca.

El tengo prisa. (right verb, wrong person)

(Yo) hago la tarea a las dos.

Necesito un lapiz.

Yo soy Veo una pelicula a las cinco. (You didn't get rid of the verb you don't need. 'Veo' means "I see (watch a film)")

El se esta relajado. (You correctly chose the reflexive pronoun, but it looks like you inadvertently changed the verb. Look at your first post and revert (if you want to use the present progressive, that is).)

Me duermo a las once.
I marked the ones you got correct. I gave you more hints about how to fix the others.
Ask questions if you don't understand what needs to change.
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Necesito para apagar la luz. (Again, what are you trying to say here, in English?) I need to turn off the light. (The verb "necesitar" is followed directly by an infinitive; it does not require a preposition.)
Me preparo por(need a preposition here) tomar una ducha a las siete y veinte. (What you need is a preposition, like the one for 'to' - the Spanish infinitive doesn't have a built-in 'to' like most text books would have you believe.)(Right idea, but the wrong preposition.)
El se(missing a pronoun - cepillarse is reflexive, so the reflexive pronoun goes here) esta cepillando en el bano.
Me estoy desayuno a la seite y veinte y cinco. (The conjugation is incorrect. You are trying to use the present progressive. I wouldn't. Just say 'me desayuno'. That means "I eat breakfast.") (You haven't changed this yet.)
El usa las manos y la boca.

El tengo prisa. (wrong verb)(right verb, wrong agreement)

Yo hago la tarea a las dos. (How do you say "I do"?)
Necesito un lapiz. (wrong article)

Yo soy veo una pelicula a las cinco. ('veo' means "I see (watch a film)")(You can't have 2 conjugated verbs in a row. It looks like you're trying to use a progressive form, but "soy" is the wrong verb and "veo" needs to be replaced with the gerundio. However, the simple present "veo" by itself is perfectly fine here.)
El se(missing something here) esta relajado. (relajarse is a reflexive verb, so you need a reflexive pronoun)
Me duermo a las once. (conjugate the verb - the reflexive pronoun is correct)

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Better yet. There's still a couple of things to fix.
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